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WARNING: cursing, but nothing more than PG-13. I won't use the F-word, but I figuired I'd give sensitive viewers fair warning.  


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"_______, there's this new student, and he is gorgeous!"

Your friend Hungary flounced up to you with her boyfriend, Gilbert, in tow. He was blushing and muttering something about "unawesome".

The whole school was buzzing with rumors about the two new boys. It was a pretty big school, but they were foreigners or something like that. You didn't really care.

"Yeah, sure, 'evs." You muttered and flipped another page in your book.

"_______, you can't just say 'evs'. You have to at least say 'what'evs'. And what do you mean you don't care?!" She huffed.

"It's a little like this, Lizzy: I don't care."

"I'm warning you girl, at this rate, you'll be single forever. You really need to get yourself out there. You know, putting the past behind you and-"

You snapped your book shut, cutting her off. "I appreciate it Liz, but it's fine. I've had enough boys to last my high school career and more. Now if you'll excuse me." You brushed past them, whacking Gilbert in the arm with your book.

"Oi, vhat did I do?!"

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Al's POV

So this whole school gig seemed pretty lame. All these girls are making it tough for me to get to my classes and stuff. A guy's got shit to do, you know? But what can I say, I attract a mean crowd, sometimes literally.

And that's when I saw her! Well, she wasn't the hottest thing on the planet, but I walked right by her, and I shit you not, this chick just gave me this 'don't even think about effing with me' look. And then I was like, 'that's my kind of doll'.
:iconwhisperingwatermelon:
Alright, so the next chapters will be much longer than this one, and there'll probs be some cursing later on (he is 2p Al XD), but this is just the first bit. It won't be complete fluff, although there will be that too. It'll probably be a little depressing though, as reader-chan had some issues with a boyfriend in the past, and they still affect her. Just thought I'd give you fair warning!

The preview image (if it worked) is not mine. I found it on tumbler and do not know who the artist is.
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=kalliatkuan Mar 22, 2013  Student General Artist
Al's POV:

Made me laugh sooooo hard

Is fucking brilliant

Made me squeal
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:icondaughteroferberus:
You just had to get me hooked, didn't you Author-Chan? -.-
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:iconwhisperingwatermelon:
:iconeweplz: Yay! You are hooked! XD
I'm glad you like it. :D
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:iconqueen-of-the-pride:
I'm really looking forward to this story. Like. this is a great start.
That last paragraph though. You know its never a good sign when a 2p!Hetalian has decided to have a fixation on you XD
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:iconwhisperingwatermelon:
Thank you!
IKR? Depending on the writer, they'll either snuggle you or murder you. XD
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:iconqueen-of-the-pride:
You're very welcome :3
There's never any in-between either. I mean, you might get lucky, and have both but, there's no other options for poor Reader-Chan XD
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~PhoenixOfWinterfell Feb 15, 2013  Student Writer
Wow, that's awesome! I'm waiting for the next chapter! :D
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~drawingaddict123 Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!
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